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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-10-12 06:08 AM


Desperado

I don't know why she
couldn't fall in love.
I know why I could
and yet my desires
were unappreciated
and my intentions
misunderstood.

It all seems
so desperate
to give one's
love away
to someone who
has no love to share
and no desire to stay.

JamesLee
October12
2001

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (edited 10-12-2001).]

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rwood
Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
1 posted 2001-10-12 08:10 AM


I don't understand that either James. Sometimes their are wounds that people won't ever let heal. Which makes it very hard to trust. I say one must always give love a chance. For we can't let our past chain us to the fence. Very good write!

Sincerely,
Regina

Nate Dogg
Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
2 posted 2001-10-12 09:31 AM


I see what you mean James, a nice, heartfelt write...take care!

Nathan

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