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GhostWriter_6
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0 posted 2001-10-12 01:35 AM



“Friendship Or Relationship”

I’m having premonitions of what I’m missing,
I invision us as a couple every time were kissing.
They say it is better to have loved and lost
Than too never have loved at all,
But to loose you … I’m too afraid to take that fall.
I look at you and see the ideal female
That I never thought could be created in this lifetime,
However secretly I’m scared to take it back
To that relationship status one more time.
Hurting someone like you is something I can deal without,
Because hurting you is defeating the purpose of what our friendship is all about.


© Copyright 2001 Antonio Marquis Bankhead - All Rights Reserved
Nate Dogg
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1 posted 2001-10-12 01:40 AM


This is a sincere and very nice write...thanks for sharing!!

Nathan

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2 posted 2001-10-12 01:43 AM


Now this is lovely  
what a very sweet thing to say.
I sure do hope you give this to her  

GhostWriter_6
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3 posted 2001-10-12 09:11 AM


Thank you for the replies

Domzi
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4 posted 2001-10-13 10:52 PM


This poem was soooo sweet!

As my borough has always stated- Do or Die.

Tracey
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5 posted 2001-10-13 11:02 PM


It is indeed better to have loved and lost, than never to have loved at all. And if you have the chance to do it again, then I say grab that chance and run with it.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Startime
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6 posted 2001-10-13 11:36 PM


This wonderful poem sings with love and romance. Very well done. I hope you read it to her.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Heather Miller
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7 posted 2001-10-14 12:25 PM


SOOOOOOO Sweet  
What a lucky girl!!!
Heather (CherokeeGirl)

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

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