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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2001-09-18 09:09 PM


TRUE COLORS


T aking control of who you are
R ealizing what gifts you hold
U nderstanding what you want
E xpecting nothing less than you deserve

C elebrate who you are
O perating with the knowledge that
L oving yourself is the way to succeed
O pening your heart and mind
R aising your voice so all can hear
S ee me, love me for what I am



TaraB

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 09-18-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-09-18 09:34 PM


Very well said!  
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2 posted 2001-09-18 10:00 PM


well done rosepedals...enjoyed it,
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3 posted 2001-09-18 10:18 PM


VERY WELL DONE!!

~Time has cast a spell on you
  so you won't ever forget me~

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4 posted 2001-09-19 03:56 AM


RosePetals~
Tara, this is just lovely.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2001-09-19 06:44 PM


I love this rp. . . great job. . .  

these are the best colors of all. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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6 posted 2001-09-19 06:53 PM


Tara~

Sing it Sista!     
Amen to that!  This has always been my philosophy - but, of course, yours is exquisitely penned.
What a lovely acrostic, they should make a billboard sign of this!

Take care,
Melissa~


"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~


[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 09-19-2001).]

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7 posted 2001-09-20 09:33 PM


rosepetals25

I love the important
message in this!
well done

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8 posted 2001-09-20 11:34 PM


Amen!  Good work, Tara.  

Michael

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There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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9 posted 2001-09-23 04:40 PM



rosepetals-
   I'm liking this one lots!
   Beautiful thoughts, my friend.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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