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JamesBowie
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since 2000-11-25
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big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

0 posted 2001-10-10 10:31 PM


for every action there is
an equal and opposite reaction
That stated, is it true then
that true love causes true pain
or that in losing a dearest part
should we be gaining something new
or does physics only work
outside of the mind
and is it our action that brings
tides of change to come our way
for thought has no opposite
unless we think nothing of each other

© Copyright 2001 James Bowie - All Rights Reserved
Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding
1 posted 2001-10-10 10:44 PM


Now you have certainly given me something to ponder here. Very interesting write.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
2 posted 2001-10-10 10:46 PM


damn!!
james!!! this is awesome, thought provoking, succinct....

good grief.

really well done....... really.... i loved this

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

3 posted 2001-10-10 11:29 PM


for thought has no opposite
unless we think nothing of each other

Damn, I wish I had written that.  Great poem.

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