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HopeS
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Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2001-10-10 07:27 AM


Upon Heart Notes We Sail

The love being spread
On ocean far and wide
I heard whispers call
To be by your side

Those heartfelt words
Feeling special to me
Across a sea of love
You always will be

Matching in harmony
Forever words meet
Rhythms and rhymes
We flow each beat

Across rippling wave
In tuned with the sea
Two heart’s joining
With loving melody

Tasting the pleasures
Love intimate potion
Upon notes we sail
Heart across ocean

Hope © 2001

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Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
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where insanity meets breeding
1 posted 2001-10-10 07:37 AM


What a beautiful write. Even an ocean cannot seperate love.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

HopeS
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Perth Western Australia
2 posted 2001-10-10 11:16 AM


Thanks Tracey
yes across the ocean inspires my desires
Hope

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