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Nurse Crachet
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They know where I am!

0 posted 2001-10-09 04:16 PM


Redemption of Crayon King

Invisibility, an act or be it your crime?
The wincing of intellectual properties.
Your wisdom draws many conclusions,
Yet charcoal outlines smear a truth.

Wondering depth of mirrored discrepancies,
Reflections based upon illusioned disbeliefs.
Truanced within a magnified glass atmosphere,
Trading glimpses while actions banter about.

I've a cure for this whimsical dealt delusion,
Saddle up, pack up, we're going for a ride.
Once again, Silly-Bus shall traverse land,
Destination, redemption of Crayon King.

Doc Moose shall be our determined chauffer,
All Justin’s congregate amongst yourselves,
No head to head bumping or smashing please!
Control be your key for this persuasive journey.

Lady in Red, get out of Doughboy’s bed!
Time is precious, and we don’t need you baked.
One Flew Over, stop dropping things on Tex,
Get on this bus pronto, only ten minutes left.

Kicking and screaming the others all join,
A moment of history, with the Stute’s empty halls.
The Silly-Bus rocking, those Justin’s won’t stop,
Redemption may end up deeper than thought.



© Copyright 2001 Nurse Crachet - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2001-10-09 07:15 PM


Sounds like the gangs all getting together again for another wild ride!  
Tracey
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2 posted 2001-10-10 07:15 AM


Methinks this is going to get very, very interesting. The inmates have been very quiet of late, but I think the nurse has just woken them out of their coma's.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Sunshine
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3 posted 2001-10-10 08:42 AM



Nurse Crachet, it's been some time
since you've been here to give us rhyme
a journey to take, a story to tell
make sure you bring that old dinner bell...


Munda
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4 posted 2001-10-15 01:38 PM


I can't believe I missed this! Saddle the Moose! Get the Justins! Heck, even get Red! Get the crazy bunch going Nurse!  
Andrew Scott
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5 posted 2001-10-15 02:03 PM


Hmmmmm... exactly what is the redemption value of an invisible king and his box of crayons? Five cents?  Ten cents?  Perhaps it goes by weight.  And if so, then I should cease with the diet... for every pound could be just that! Pound for pound... sounds like a deal.  But you must only redeem me when I hit 500 lbs.  Only then can I afford that JUMBO size box of crayons I've been eyeballing in the town of Bewilderment.  Until such time, follow your nose... for only it knows where the King goes.  
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