Loving You - double acrostic

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Open Poetry #16

Loving You - double acrostic

Topheth
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since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

0 posted 2001-09-20 11:25 PM

Love lingers
  over our
    vibrant varieties,
       indiscreet indecencies,
         naughty novelties,
           gallant giddiness,

youthful yearning
  of our
    unerring understanding.

[This message has been edited by Topheth (edited 09-20-2001).]

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

1 posted 2001-09-20 11:41 PM

Oh, yes! Extremely well-penned!

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

2 posted 2001-09-20 11:47 PM

Well done Topheth...good job
alan

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-09-21 11:42 PM

very very cool

I wish I could do that

Topheth
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

4 posted 2001-09-21 11:45 PM

You can, SEA, you can - see?
You're antsy, be chancey;
You can, SEA, you can - see?

[This message has been edited by Topheth (edited 09-21-2001).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-09-21 11:47 PM

dang it

I'm trying those under 20's too
they are not easy LOL

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

6 posted 2001-09-21 11:50 PM

This is so awesome

You clever lil'

you!

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Topheth
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

7 posted 2001-09-21 11:59 PM

Now I'm all warm inside...

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