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Tennessee Angel
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0 posted 2001-10-08 12:34 PM



If there was no Heaven;
no streets of gold to tread;
no band of angels waiting
to greet me when I'm dead;

If there was no crown of life;
no mansion built for me;
If the gates of pearl were just a myth
and there was no crystal sea;

If there was nothing to be won;
no rewards that bore my name;
If there was no Paradise
I would have loved you just the same.

If there was no "Well done, my son"
and I received no robe of white;
no walk and talk with saints of old;
no brilliant, blinding light;

If the end was just the end;
One day I'm here and then I'm gone;
If there was no throne to kneel beside;
no sands of time to walk upon;

If the only thing you ever gave
was the blood that stained a cross;
Still I'd serve you to my dying day
no matter what the cost.

Thank you for walking by my side
and for your mercy great.
Thank you for all you've done for me
and for my home that's on the way.

You've already done so much for me
that I really need to say...
If there was no Heaven
I would have loved you anyway.

© Copyright 2001 Stacy - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-08 12:38 PM


Sounds like you found Heaven already....
inot2B
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2 posted 2001-10-08 12:44 PM


Beautiful poem and tribute.

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3 posted 2001-10-08 02:25 AM


Enjoyed....James
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4 posted 2001-10-08 04:58 AM


TennesseeAngel~
Talk about undaunted faith ! !
This is WONDERFUL~

I feel this is worth submitting to the main site and sharing with the world.
Bless you for sharing it with me~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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ellie LeJeune
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5 posted 2001-10-08 06:46 AM


How glorious is your faith! I too join you in saying I would love Him anyway! He is our all!  This poem is magnificent and wonderfully inspiring! Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 2001-10-08 08:06 AM


A very inspiring piece
WEll done
Liz

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7 posted 2001-10-08 08:30 AM


TA Margie girl is right this is utterly utterly fabulous. You should have this on the main site. This is a gift of pure wonder, you have written an absolute beauty here.
Take care
walk on in HIS light
Love and warm stuff
Marsha

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


Kit McCallum
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8 posted 2001-10-08 09:16 AM


Wonderful ponderings in this heavenly piece Tennessee Angel ... very much enjoyed this uplifting and inspirational piece!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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9 posted 2001-10-08 09:45 AM


Oh, I like this. I'm glad there really is a heaven. Thank you for posting it.
Dennis L. White
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10 posted 2001-10-08 11:21 AM


Tennessee Angel,
  A wonderful poem of faith and gratitude.
I plan on saving this to my library collection so I can visit it when I need encouragement and refreshed perspective. Thanks for sharing this GEM, Dennis

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11 posted 2001-10-08 11:25 AM


tennesse angel,

your faith is
refreshing, this is
lovely and inspiring!
  

[This message has been edited by Chelsea~ (edited 10-08-2001).]

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12 posted 2001-10-08 11:32 AM


enjoy
cpalmer
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13 posted 2001-10-08 12:12 PM


AMEN!
This is just beautiful!
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

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14 posted 2001-10-08 01:30 PM


This is one of the most beautiful expressions of faith that I have ever read! Very well done!
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15 posted 2001-10-08 02:02 PM



This is absolutely wonderful!  
I'm printing it out right now.  You really should enter this beauty in a contest - you would touch the hearts of many  
Well expressed, this is so beautiful!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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16 posted 2001-10-08 02:32 PM


utterly beautiful penned, precious gem that will be saved in my library.

Charisma

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17 posted 2001-10-08 02:43 PM



TA - this is a marvelous write, and you must know, there are angels all around you, willing to share this remarkable piece...

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18 posted 2001-10-08 04:12 PM


Truly your hand was guided by God.  Just a magnificent write done in unrelenting faith.  You are blessed.
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19 posted 2001-10-08 05:04 PM


Your poem is so touching and inspiring.  Thanks for posting it!

Betty Lou Hebert

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20 posted 2001-10-08 06:04 PM


What a wonderfully refreshing read. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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21 posted 2001-10-08 06:10 PM


ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL POEM!! Thank you for sharing.
       AMEN!    God Bless you.  

smiles ~Marie~

Keep the Faith

Titia Geertman
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22 posted 2001-10-09 06:12 PM


This is a true love poem

Titia

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