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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2001-10-07 06:29 PM

On This Starry Night

On this starry night of endless sky
Let the dream begin with just a sigh
Let me wonder at each star-lit beam
For I have a thousand dreams to dream

On this evening under autumn moon
Let my heart in rapture be consumed
Let this be the moment I will find
Another love, if only in my mind

Let enchantment pour from glowing light
Draped around me in the deep of night
Sparkling in the depth of someone’s eyes
Gazing jewels that have me mesmerized

I am ready for a new romance
Let the music play, let lovers dance
Don’t let love unspoken pass me by
On this starry night of endless sky

Elizabeth Santos

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2001-10-07 06:34 PM

Beautifully expressed, Liz!

I long for this too!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

2 posted 2001-10-07 08:05 PM

Liz,

this was just beautiful. full of so
much hope and longing. wonderfully
expressive and emotive!! enjoyed reading
this very much. thank you for the smile.

take care.
amy

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

3 posted 2001-10-08 12:45 PM

What a lovely piece, and with perfect rhythm.

I am ready for a new romance
Let the music play, let lovers dance

I hope you find it.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

kitkat
Senior Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

4 posted 2001-10-08 02:01 AM

Hold on to that dream and those starry nights--Before you know it you will be sharing that with someone special under a brilliant moon.

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2001-10-08 02:19 AM

Liz, this one is making me starry eyed.
"When you wish upon a star...
your dreams come true"
Remember that song?
Now, let's go out and pick out some stars, there are millions of them out there, just waiting for each of us.
But how to find the right one??????

StarLiteRose
Junior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 20
Rose from the Sky

6 posted 2001-10-08 12:54 PM

Very nice poem! I love the stars, and wonderful nights with romance..

"The Stars shine bright and down upon me, the Rose of the Sky" -Me

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

7 posted 2001-10-08 01:25 PM

Ah, I sighed...
On this starry night of endless sky
Let the dream begin with just a sigh...and remembered, "When you wish upon a star...may all your dreams come true"...and I sighed at the end too

Dreamy, romantic, and oh full of gentle sighs.

~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2001-10-08 01:34 PM

Let enchantment pour from glowing light
Draped around me in the deep of night
Sparkling in the depth of someone’s eyes
Gazing jewels that have me mesmerized

I am ready for a new romance
Let the music play, let lovers dance
Don’t let love unspoken pass me by
On this starry night of endless sky
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THIS IS PERFECTLY BEAUTIFUL!!! Thank you hugs to you!! ~Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

9 posted 2001-10-08 02:53 PM

Beautiful, Elizabeth!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

10 posted 2001-10-08 03:59 PM

new romance coming
refreshing your heart and mind
head held high, smiling

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

11 posted 2001-10-08 06:18 PM

Very Beautiful and well written! I love the moon and stars.

smiles ~Marie~

Keep the Faith

[This message has been edited by sunshinemist (edited 10-08-2001).]

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

12 posted 2001-10-08 06:28 PM

Ahh, Liz, how could it not be, for one that has so much love in the soul as you pass to delight the reader of your words..very gentle smile

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

13 posted 2001-10-09 03:49 PM

There is something to be said about the stars.
They carry a certain romance and mystery in their twinkle.

Beautiful words Elizabeth.
May your wish come true, and may it be the brightest
and most beautiful star

you can find!

~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

14 posted 2001-10-09 05:39 PM

Beautiful Liz......beautiful penned, that touched my heart.

Charisma

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

15 posted 2001-10-09 07:56 PM

Liz,
As always I love your writing...beautiful, gave be goose bumps!
Hugs
Cindi

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