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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
It’s an open book Printed over time Both in Braille And words You can read The story Or feel it letting Fingers trace What eyes scan As the chapters Change. It’s an open book Written word By world By wound And now A bit tattered Around the edges But, Still Serviceable And complete. Let me turn The page. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
this edginess brought me up sharp.... a good write.... a better introspection.... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I enjoyed the journey this takes one through and that last statement is superb...such a lovely invitation to the rest of your life, truly a wondrous gift to offer your special someone. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
You say that I have a way with words, but you are the master of them :-) Excellent... ~Tier |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
A Mystery. Captivated me. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
A somber feeling of realism and a heavier pang of inner-torment, marked with decisive resolution... Consistantly powerful work, Ron. So, when's your book due out again...? -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I've read this book. . . excellent work. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Indeed captivating, your words move me. Well done.  On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Very well written, you have awonderful stile to your work. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I feel tattered around the edges too, you write the thoughts well. Sandra |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
wow....love it! You have said so much with this image. ~Krista  "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Ah...but those tattered edges are what make it so endearing...keep turning those pages! |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Loved this as I enjoy all your pages. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Turn the page indeed. We have many chapters to go my friend and we have just gotten past the foreword |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Ron, *shaking my head and grinning* You have done it again. This is almost a direct composition of a very vivid visionary type dream I once had. I realize that my interpretations of your work tend to completely discount intent...but hey, what can I say? You touch me in strange places...(ouch, the things I type!  )Enjoyed very much. (hmmm...maybe too much?) (I exit, laughing...) oh. and thank you.  |
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