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HopeS
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0 posted 2001-07-26 09:22 AM



Entwine Blissfully

Across my world
Over the stream
Keep it flowing
Follow me dream

Across my heart
Love and shine
Warming glows
Share with mine

Across my night
To stay awhile
Moonlight kiss
Light my smile

Across my room
To reach aloft
Lay beside me
Pillows are soft

Across my desire
Touch lovingly
Lips upon mine
Taste tenderly

Across my caress
Love enter in
Brushing lightly
Soft velvet skin

Across my urges
Senses capture
In love to bask
Held in rapture

Across my dream
Stroke ecstasy
Afterglow kisses
Entwine blissfully

Hope

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1 posted 2001-07-26 09:26 AM


very nice feel to this.. I enjoyed
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2001-07-26 09:26 AM


Hopes,
Across my mind
I find entwined
A lovely poem.

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2001-07-27 12:07 PM


Very nice as it flowed across my screen

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth
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Honeybee
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4 posted 2001-07-27 12:09 PM



Very lovely with an excellent flow  

Melissa~

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