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jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298


0 posted 2001-07-24 02:16 PM


no time to play, surfing scurry
hurry here and there
just happen across the first clue-
lines laughed, finger tipped replies.
   pop a can't help but smile in my bag
   and check off item number one.

online racing,
speeding ticket bound
but a thought provoker
catches my eye, I screech to a halt-
listen to a voice with a here I am  
self assurance…
   pop a wish I was too in my bag
   and check off item number two.

missing you lines straight painted
down a no passing zone
I turn the corner to find that
your  "been there too"
says more than you will know.
   pop compassion understood in my bag
   and check off item number three

angles favor the sides of your smile
just below a pair of beautiful
unarmed eyes, that draw me inside
take a block I do
with time no longer a regard.
   pop a heart throb in my bag
   and check off item number four.

six minutes I take
to walk with you
and stand open mouthed
at your gift, nature shared,
appreciation spreads your hands wide.
   pop a wonderful heart in my bag
   item number five...
   only a few items left

Conclusion clouds darkly ahead
I stop open eyed,
wait a minute, I don’t know the rules
for this game, and
just what is the winner promised here?
unaware, I was taken, I think,
by the pleasure of the hunt
   I smile and
   my list I let fly

[This message has been edited by jellybeans (edited 07-24-2001).]

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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
1 posted 2001-07-24 02:27 PM


okay, did you take 'clever pills' this morning, these are so unique and fun,
very contemporary
enjoyed!!!

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298

2 posted 2001-07-24 02:38 PM


lol......thank you...and nope just posting some stuff I wrote a while back when I wasn't coming to PIP very often. thanks  
Lady In White
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3 posted 2001-07-27 04:54 PM



gads this is good....

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