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Émigré, I
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Émigré, I |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Émigré, I émigré, emeute! emigrant expelled, spent language confounded how is it I know what might touch hearts of poets speaking one to one I, immigrant, come through heritage, I be, one roots still gaining hold my years do then count to add prestige to this state émigré, emeute! Voices Speak Karilea |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Superb... especially after I spent the day with my immigrandma.....  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nan... thank you. I hope you might some day share it with her. You do not know ... what this means to me. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
and are we not all? very gentle smile. Enjoyed very much, Sissie |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ So gently felt~ This happens to be wonderful, you know ? *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Logan, Sir...no, some are pure....but...few and far between.....so I would venture, "most".... Marge...how you understand....and in that, remain phenomenal in all you do.... how can I thank you? I just did....for you know....my shy.... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
yes amazingly well-done! |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Quite a well-done piece You have such a wonderful pen......dear friend.....as always Thank you ********************** It's only me.......only me |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Very well.....although it is some what diffilut forme to understand......lol  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
As a "this, that, and the other thing", my heart heard this one, and loved it.  If you have a choice to sit down or dance, dance! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done... I enjoyed... and I would kindly point out..that even the native americans have been classified as immigrants as they supposedly came to this continent from others... I think this would fit all... |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
The common language of the poet is the pen of passion and the feelings which are expressed in its words. No matter the birth place or the distance apart, a poet says all with their heart. Enjoyed the read GOOOOD work. Rick |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sunshine--from somewhere else we come to find our heart travels over boarders and remains the only home. Wonderful poem! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
deevine yuh |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Very nice... Cindi |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I admire someone who can put something like this together, I don't speak spanish but dabble in French! |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
This touched my heart. I know it will touch many. To feel the pull of a distant home and the promise of a new beginning---- |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Virginia, I will take your amazing and run away now! Thank you!... MyEnchantedMelody...those are very kind words, and I thank you from my heart... Waseem, you and I shall continue to learn all of the forums...this was done in the 5-7-5 syllable count of Senryu... Mysteria, you take "this", I'll grab "that" and we'll meet on the planes of "the other thing"...{smiles} Cpat, I think we are all immigrants of one kind or another...just think, if we all take a step from where we were to where we are now, that too is am immigration of some sort...thank you! Rick, your Gooood mooooves me! Thank you! Martie, no, we should never leave our heart behind...! Thank you!... Thank you Walt... Cindi, thanks for reading... Irish, if I didn't have my many books surrounding me, I don't know that this would have come about! Thank you... Constance, it is a pleasure to welcome you to Passions! Sharing is what we are all about! Thank you for looking on the back pages to bring this back to the top! |
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