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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-07-23 08:42 PM



You Make Me Laugh

~*Marge Tindal*~

I heard your voice in the crowd
you were laughing out loud
What a memory it stirred
in other words ...
you lit up the room
and then all too soon
I was laughing again
at a giggle shared with a friend
I may forget for a while
then your memory smiles
and I'm off again remembering
how you make me laugh~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                 noles1@totcon.com              

© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
vlraynes
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1 posted 2001-07-23 08:48 PM



Marge-
   This is so sweet...just like you..  
   I love it, and the graphic too..

   hugs,
   ~vicky




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heart, you have not truely met the poet."
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[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-23-2001).]

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2 posted 2001-07-23 08:49 PM


There's nothing better than a shared giggle...or the memory of one...this is precious, Marge!
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3 posted 2001-07-23 08:49 PM



And YOU make me smile! This is so precious...and reminds me of many things...

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4 posted 2001-07-23 08:51 PM


Well, this deer loves nothing more than making you laugh, Seminole lady   Your laughter is the sound that makes the world a nicer place to be in...

(did I tell you about the blonde who got fired from the M&M factory for throwing away the W's?  

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5 posted 2001-07-23 09:43 PM


A good laugh, a good smile, a chuckle or a giggle is best for the soul...very nicely done, Marge..very gentle smile
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6 posted 2001-07-23 10:36 PM


I really like this...there are some people whose laughter (or mere smiles) just sparks a certain something in us...very nice write...

sp  

it was love that first drew me,
it is love that will keep me here...
now I see love burning brightly
when everything else is unclear...

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7 posted 2001-07-23 10:37 PM


Marge--Laughter is the bubble in joy...drink it up!!  Hugs!
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8 posted 2001-07-23 10:54 PM


Vicky~
Awwwwww ! Now I've got another smile.

Denise~
I find such reason to smile ...
good friends - good memories.

Karilea~
Aren't friends just the greatest smile-makers ?

Balladeer~
LOL !
Everyone knows that the W&W's don't get to the trash can ...
they melt in your hand !
The 'blonde' goes to the roots, not the brain.

Logan~
Hello, sweet person.
Nice to see your smile.

SnowPants~
Exactly ! ! And I thank you.

Martie~
I am ! And getting intoxicated with the joy of it all !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                 noles1@totcon.com              

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9 posted 2001-07-23 10:57 PM


Marge
I loved every word of this uplifting piece of writing from you.  If we can't laugh at others or ourselves, then we are really missing out I think.  Laughter is certainly the best medicine to cure many ills.
Take care......Sue

Suetang

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10 posted 2001-07-24 01:16 AM


SueTang~
I certainly do my share of laughing ...
and smile in easy-remembrance of those who have left their laughter all across my heart.

Thank you for your kind reply.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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11 posted 2001-07-24 07:05 AM


You make me smile and you make me laugh. Thanks.
Remember: He who laughs last, thinks slowest.
Have a good day!

Melton

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12 posted 2001-07-24 07:50 AM


Can I share a laugh too
I have to practice more
even if there is no reason
laughter is what I adore
sunny smiles will break
dark minutes of each day
oh these sunny awards
drives my moodies away.

You know how to share your laugh....reading your poetry brought always a smile up.

((hugs))
Charisma


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13 posted 2001-07-24 12:16 PM


Melton~
LOL !
Actually ... it gives them time for the laughter to sink in deep !

Charisma~
Look at you, girlie !
Cute, cute quip !
I like spreading smiles ... glad you are wearing one.
Love n' hugs~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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14 posted 2001-07-25 12:30 PM


remember my laughs
I will remember your words
golden memories

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth
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15 posted 2001-07-25 12:35 PM


oh yeah..this one hits me right there...    love it..can think of a few people who evoke the same in myself..  

hugs, g

"sometimes when youre hurrying too much to see whats for tomorrow, you miss whats for today.."  -demi moore

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16 posted 2001-07-25 12:52 PM


You make me laugh.
Gail

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17 posted 2001-07-25 05:29 PM


Made me smile, laugh and remember, thank you Marge.

~ Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance ~ I hope you dance. (Lee Ann Womack)

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18 posted 2001-07-25 06:34 PM


I for one will always enjoy YOUR laugh and if I succeed in giving one back then you know of course my day is complete.  Laughter after all is the first ingredient in peace.  

gv ge yuhi!

Marge Tindal
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19 posted 2001-07-25 07:56 PM


InterLoper~
Thank you for the Senryu~  Lovely !

DG~
Yeah ... amazing isn't it ???

Gail~
I try !  Thanks for letting me know I succeeded !

Mysteria~
My pleasure, sweet lady.

MarkB~
I want to just write you a whole page of gv ge yuhi's ! !
I hope you know how much you're missed !
Love ya', babe !

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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