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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-07-22 02:33 PM



Looking 'ore the horizon
     and the mountains majesty
     they reach right up touching clouds
     into the heavens they see.

     Billowing clouds cast overhead
     creating shadows big and small
     leaves now dropped from the trees
     yet still they stand tall.

     The sky so blue up above
     far beyond compare
     this longing in my heart
     is to still be living there.

     I thank God for a day
     that presents such an awesome sight
     and when the sun is sinking low
     it will bring with it a beautiful night.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

© Copyright 2001 dmsmith - All Rights Reserved
Jamie
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Blue Heaven
1 posted 2001-07-22 02:37 PM


Maybe you could sell this to the Colorodo Tourism Commission ( or whatever they might call it) Nicely done.

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2001-07-22 02:40 PM


Colorado, PA, or wherever Jamie, my spirit misses the mountains greatly, and everytime I look there way the memories come back.  Thank you.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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3 posted 2001-07-22 04:48 PM


Beautiful poem GS..lovely imagery...
maybe these will hold ya over till ya can see the real thing  





only you could give love that satisfies the soul...
see the darkness of my heart and still won't let me go.

walker
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Florida
4 posted 2001-07-22 05:19 PM


I love this one, I miss the mountains so.
rwood
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Tennessee
5 posted 2001-07-22 05:31 PM


They do have a mystical presence that calls you. I live in the Great Smokey Mts. Thank you for a kindred spirit! Beautiful!
Sincerely,
Rwood

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2001-07-25 07:18 PM


JM, Walker, Rwood, Thank you all so  much......oh Janet, you made me really sick for those mountains now.  Walker, I miss the mountains also, And RW, it is good to know there are other kindred spirits out there.  Thanks ya'll.!!!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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