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Trina
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0 posted 2001-07-21 11:57 PM


I got time in my hands
and I won't let it go
I wasted too much
and I can't get it
back

I got time in my hands
and I must make use
before it runs out
and time
I just lose

I got time in my hands
but not for too long
time's on my side
but soon it'll move on

When time comes to you
you've got to be ready
because when it's time to go
time will leave

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Jamie
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1 posted 2001-07-24 07:21 PM


nice premise-- poems about time can be hard to do..  

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
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2 posted 2001-08-09 04:21 PM



Trina, did you find some extra time somewhere?  I've lost all of mine...enjoyed!

Trina
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3 posted 2001-08-09 07:23 PM


Thanx both of you for reading. I wasn't sure if this one really made much sense and I kind of still think it doesn't being that only you two have replied to it. I wish I did have some extra time it's all going by so fast.
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