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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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~Piptalk.com~ three a.m. again haven't slept a wink tonight answered passions' call just one poem more ok...maybe two or three reading until dawn body conquers mind eyelids close with want of sleep time to say goodnight resting weary head count senryu instead of sheep dream in word and rhyme sleep the day away wake refreshed to evening sun brand new verse to pen log onto the net piptalk.com here i come do it all again ~vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Very neat! An insomniac's senryu - excellent job Vicky (psst, check the time) maybe there should be a forum for those of us that do not sleep?) Well done! ~ You do this dance only once ~ |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Oh WOW you must have been peeking into my room at that time and must have seen me sitting there  , cheeks all red  , eyes wide open  , gasping at all those beautiful poems  Loved this one very very much because I do relate to it so well. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Feel free to use the pictures on my website. [URL=http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/]http://communities. [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 07-21-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
poetry should come with a warning about being so addicting. now we need poerty-aholics.com  cute, clever and creative senyru collection Vicky.. and very true.. even a cowboy hat wearing "rehab warden" couldnt keep me out of here long LOL (of course that could have been due to the fact the warden needed poetry rehab as well) LOL  only you could give love that satisfies the soul... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well girl, I see this one being printed out and displayed on desks all over the world! It is TOO true! and Cute! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Vicky--I think there are a lot of us that know just what you mean. I much enjoyed! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"resting weary head count senryu instead of sheep dream in word and rhyme" A wonderful collection and said beautifully Vicky, really well done - much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
you've got it bad and so do I no matter how I try and try to stay away and do some work but when I'm here, I really perk cuz all you poets are so fun coming here is not out done that even obligation, such cannot keep me out of touch well, most if they're only to myself the obligations, that is |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
i know the addiction well!  wish i could afford the same habit!!liked this one tricks hugs, g "sometimes when youre hurrying too much to see whats for tomorrow, you miss whats for today.." -demi moore |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
hehe, so true! I've definitely been there Great poem, I love it!Hugs, ~Krista  "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
This is a classic, Vic, and well portrays the passionate addict insomniac, while keeping a clever senryu format. I really liked your word selection and placement...I can tell a lot of thought went into this sleepless dream. |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
I find myself doing the same thing! it's almost addicting...wish I could sleep some days away though! love this Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is a truly terrific and creative write V......I really enjoyed this!!! Nathan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Sneaking in a little 'late' ... TeehHee ! I'm Baaaaaaaaaacccccck !  Had an obviously wonderful time ... missed ya' ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Ain' it the truth...  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Mysteria- LOL..an insomniac's forum, huh? Hmmmmm...LOL.. Glad you enjoyed this, my friend. Great to see you here.. Titia- LOL...I think that's the image we'd see in several of these poets rooms. Glad you liked this little ditty.. Janet Marie- My name is Vicky, and I'm a poem-aholic! LOLROFL @ the 'cowboy hat wearing "rehab warden'...LOL...be sure and tell that warden 'hello' for me.. Really glad you enjoyed this one! Sunshine- Thanks so much, my friend! So happy you enjoyed!! Martie- Yes...probably too many can relate..LOL. Thanks for reading...glad you like! Kit- Thanks so much! Your replies always make me smile!! VAS- Thanks much! dg- Thanks pal! Glad you could relate..sort of..lol Krista- Thanks much...glad you enjoyed! Alicat- It always makes my day to see your name on a reply to my poems.. Thanks so much for the kind words! Happy you enjoyed it! Cindi- I do this WAY too much! LOL Glad you like.. Nate- I'm so glad you enjoyed this little ditty. Thanks for reading.. Marge- Well, hello there, friend! So happy to see you back! It's NEVER too late for you to arrive!! love ya, sweet lady! hugs to all, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Nan- You snuck in there when I wasn't looking! LOL Too true, isn't it? Glad you enjoyed! hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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