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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-07-20 10:45 PM


orange blossom special

orange blossom special
violin play then the whine
bring back that love, mine

start out slow, mellow
bring my languorous fellow
sing that violin

get rambunctious then
and put on a fiddlin’ spin
seek him quicker, then

orange blossom special
sing your song, and fiddle long
transport us this night


[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 07-20-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-07-20 10:49 PM


"get rambunctious then
and put on a fiddlin’ spin
seek him quicker, then"

I like this one very much  
Your pen always flows such smart rhymes

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2 posted 2001-07-21 02:26 AM


The transport of the strings in different play, you really do this well, you know...very gentle smile
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3 posted 2001-07-21 02:29 AM


As a fiddle player myself, I appreciate this poem greatly    you know your music!
~Krista  

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And all you can do is to go where they can find you."          
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4 posted 2001-07-21 02:37 AM



Sunshine-
   You always do these so well!  
   Wonderfully written..

   hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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5 posted 2001-07-21 03:36 AM


Woohoo girl...you sure make these words sing..
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6 posted 2001-07-22 12:18 PM


Kickin!!
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7 posted 2001-07-22 12:19 PM


Enjoyed these.  Nicely done.
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8 posted 2001-07-22 12:58 PM


well, alright!

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kathleen


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9 posted 2001-07-27 01:34 PM


Karilea~
Delightful foot-stompin' good one !
Me like !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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