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**lost** Junior Member
since 2001-07-16
Posts 32ma |
-this poem has much more to it than first meets the eye. Please take time to personalize it then comment. shadows a ray of light is cast upon, the shadow of doubt i posess. the moon takes heed, for the passing sun, allow its warmth my mind caress. confused among strangers, lost amongst myself. **lost** [This message has been edited by **lost** (edited 07-22-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Joline, this indeed can be interpreted many ways... Of course, given my PiP name... this likes me in many ways... thank you! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
In a word: Trust. I see an issue of trusting any signs of positivity from others, and like standing in between to mirrors which cast infinite reflections of one's self in either direction, the question arrises in self-reflectivity of whether or not the "others" can, at the same time, trust "you" if/when "you" choose to be receptive to their signs of positivity... Such is my interpretation... Thanks for the intro to suggest I analyze this poem a little deeper... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
His love for me at times I doubt But when we make love this hurt dissolves. Thanks, **lost** |
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**lost** Junior Member
since 2001-07-16
Posts 32ma |
thanks everyone for the comments. i am a victim of extreme writers self-critism. this helps me a lot. as for Mark V Sheldon, you were right on target not so much about why i wrote the poem but the issues that i myself posess. (see the lower case "i"'s) confused among strangers, lost amongst myself. **lost** [This message has been edited by **lost** (edited 07-22-2001).] |
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