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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
tell me what you see when you look inside of me tell me what you feel is it imaginary or real tell me what it means to paint poetic scenes tell me where you are when I wish upon a star tell me where I go when there's no one that I know tell me what it takes to spot those that are fakes tell me why I cry under the bright starry sky tell me what makes you smile even if only for a while tell me what comes next on the page of life's text tell me why love causes pain that showers me like the rain tell me why I'm so blessed seemingly more so than the rest tell me you'll never leave until my heart finally believes tell me please . . . All writing comes |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
ah yes...in the believe...you will find... poetic wanderings... well done, Lone Wolf... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Beautifully written......I guess some of what we write keeps others guessing as to whether it is fact or fiction. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Lone Wolf- Ah yes...much to ponder indeed..  Very nicely penned.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
tell me what you see when you look inside of me Easily, a tender soul, with the karma of goodness written deeply...very gentle smile and a very good write |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice..not sure how I missed this on the first go around..but glad I found it.. I enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lone Wolf, I guess they won't tell you because you might eat them up. LOL enjoyed |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
LW- beautiful work m'friend! I am so glad I got to see this. My trips in here are very limited these days, so twas a true pleasure to see your name among these pages of blue. Take care sweet friend! Amy "but i see your true colors, |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
LIW: I believe and hope to someday find. Thanks. Sue: No one really knows for sure unless they know us in real life outside these walls. Very true. Vicky: Life holds many mysteries indeed. Thank you. Logan: You always seem to find a way to make me smile, my gentle friend. Thank you for your kind words. Cpat: Thanks! Seymour: ROFL, perhaps I need some sheep's clothing! Hee hee! Amy: So nice to see you drop by, my friend. It's a pleasure to hear from you. I hope all is well. All writing comes |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
free verse suits you very, very nicely " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
tell me what you see when you look inside of me Ahh, LW,I can only tell you what I see, a person with great heart and soul, tender beyond belief, compassionate and caring with words that I have seen in your replies to all. A shining face that can outshine the moon, and one that anyone would be proud to have the heart of love from...very gentle smile, well, it might be more than you wanted, but you asked... |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Very beautiful, thanks. |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Very good. Very good. |
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