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Carbon Moments Revisited
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Carbon Moments Revisited what! what for me to write and what should I explore if you give me but a word then I will give you more carbon carbon and some carbon it all simply comes to mind when I wrote once of carbon I did it to unwind couldn’t rid me of the thought so took one note, then took a lot! as I looked it up to find what some papered copy might bind so very many carbo'd words some thirty-six variations how to make something of all these wordly machinations not that I am a lump of coal but perhaps a carbonation? although I do not carbonate without some imagination perhaps I could add on some dioxide but certainly not a mix of snow nor am I a bit disulfide for I have some ways to go nor am I just any process or some chemistry of CO2 perhaps a diamond in the rough if I’m good enough for you perhaps in some electricity I may have a brief spark perhaps a bit of carboyloy surely not a bit of coal, dark! don’t know why this word would linger underneath my busy fingers unless by copy of this carbon I’d be a double for you to lean on. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 07-20-2001).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
There could never be a carbon copy of you, Karilea, 'cause you're so special! It would be nice though! The more Sunshine the better!  |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
don’t know why this word would linger underneath my busy fingers unless by copy of this carbon I’d be a double for you to lean on. =================== I liked the way you played with Carbon around...... I didn't get it all too clear in the beginning but you have done such a lovly thought provoking work.... Thank you *********************** [This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (edited 07-20-2001).] |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--leave it to you to make one word into poetry that smiles. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Supercalafragalisticexpealigotias! ~ You do this dance only once ~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
heh heh heh , you mean my carbon copy? oh, my such a thought hey, maybe one could work and the other write |
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