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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2001-07-20 03:53 PM

Tasting Sunrise

If the sun dripped honey
I'd be covered in the
sweetness of a heavenly
shower, caused by the
melting moon as it dipped
another beam of angel light
upon the blushing rise
until against the mountain
side a murmur from deep
within released
and echo down the
canyon walls...
and fell in slow surrender ...
to water
blooming cactus

"Trace my body with your words
and in doing so, you touch my heart"
Snow

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-20 03:58 PM

Snow.. this has some wonderful images.

I enjoyed!

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

2 posted 2001-07-20 04:01 PM

Thank you ! I'm happy you enjoyed this one ;-)

Snow

"Trace my body with your words
and in doing so, you touch my heart"
Snow

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2001-07-20 04:17 PM

Snow-
   Now you just had to KNOW that this
   fellow Arizonian would LOVE this one!
   And I do!!

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

4 posted 2001-07-20 04:36 PM

vicky..
heehee.. i'd be
fibbing if i didn't
say "i had hoped so" ;-)
!!! thank you !!!

*hugs*
snow

"Trace my body with your words
and in doing so, you touch my heart"
Snow

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

5 posted 2001-07-20 05:46 PM

A really nice poem you wrote here.
Do love it very much.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. [URL=http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/]http://communities.

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

6 posted 2001-07-20 07:30 PM

Spectacular imagery, snow...I love this! Excellent write!

sp

it was love that first drew me,
it is love that will keep me here...
now I see love burning brightly
when everything else is unclear...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2001-07-20 08:20 PM

Snow....

I do wish...I had written this!

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

8 posted 2001-07-21 01:00 AM

I love the imagery as well...very nicely done.

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

9 posted 2001-07-21 02:26 AM

Titia, thank you so very much!!

sp, Thank you !! I'm so pleased you enjoyed it.

Sunshine, that was such an honor to read! thank you very much!!

Poeminister, thank you. I'm glad you did!

snow

"Trace my body with your words
and in doing so, you touch my heart"
Snow

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