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Honeybee
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0 posted 2001-07-18 09:44 PM



Liberation

Knowledge and kindness
the keys to liberation
open life's gold doors

By Melissa P. Monette

© Copyright 2001 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
VAS
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1 posted 2001-07-18 11:33 PM


they can definitely be keys to liberation


Poeminister
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2 posted 2001-07-18 11:33 PM


Most true.  Beautifully said.

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2001-07-18 11:44 PM


Melissa~
And you have an abundance of both qualities.
This is very nice.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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vlraynes
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4 posted 2001-07-18 11:47 PM



Melissa-
   Very nicely done..
   Enjoyed..

   hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Flutterwings
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5 posted 2001-07-18 11:54 PM


Deep meaning...... Kudos!
Loved it!   ((~.~))

Poeminister
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6 posted 2001-07-22 03:50 PM


Bump  
kaile
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7 posted 2001-07-31 04:40 AM


another bump!!

i feel anyone can write a 17-syllable musing but very few can really write one in the spirit desired of a senryu

but this is one

Interloper
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8 posted 2001-07-31 10:42 AM


My favorite form and I love this one.  Makes me envious
Well done indeed!

Finally fixed :)
http://members.home.net/excalibur2501/Interloper.htm

Sven
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9 posted 2001-08-04 02:33 PM


as I've said many times before. . . you do these with the skill of a master. . .

well done my friend. . .  

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