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haikus - I think - No, they're senryus
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haikus - I think - No, they're senryus |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands 
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 streetlights on highway performing flashing lightshow the dance of the bulbs artificial lights flowing by in endless streams brighten up your night universe colors creation of mankind's mind uncaged by their speed A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100 [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 07-10-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely captured images... I enjoyed the read....and the picture.... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Titia - many images with the shorten verse. Very nice and is just what one would see of the lights. BC |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
amazing photo...did you take it???? your words, of course, are senryu or senyru, I can't recall which, because they don't have to do with nature no matter what form this is, it's wonderful! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, I think Virginia is right BUT I love it! and that picture must have blinded the photographer! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Beautiful, but Senryus ... Either way, I love 'em  |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Cpat Hair, glad you enjoyed Bill, thanks for your kind reply VAS, the photo was taken by a friend driving home after a visit (uses his digital camera). Well that is: his wife drove for he was too busy taking pictures, I've more of them. Irish Rose, yes, they're senryus, VAS was right, hesitated for a moment, thanks for reading. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Interloper, yes I changed the tittle already. Glad you liked them. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Light streaks as blitzen Illuminating night skies Donner to follow |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Oh WOW Nan, that's a beauty, thank you. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
as a child, driving in the city at night was my favorite....I used to think it was magical, and that something really wonderful was waiting for me there......now I know, I'll always be a country girl....but the lights are still pretty to me I liked these very much |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've captured these images perfectly Titia, very nicely done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
from LA skyline red rubies follow diamonds capturing wide eyes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Titia~ Beautiful imagery. The photo is set off perfectly by your verse. You do these so well, poet friend. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Its very good..Now it is becoming a custom to have poems on pics..LOL..Very well |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
lovely and the pic just made it perfect |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
SEA, us countrygirls don't get to see those streaming lights too often, do we  Kit, thanks for reading Sunshine, you keep those senryus coming girl Marge, always  when reading your repliesWaseem, I think it's great to have pictures with haikus and senryus, to any poem actually, thanks. Paula, glad you liked them A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
electroencephalographic. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Fabulous! Your imagery is great here. For someone who was a little hazy about the form they were using, you certainly have used it quite skillfully! ~Krista "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Lighthousebob, that's a poem in itself, thank you. Krista, I'm , you're too kind. I do love to write them, cause then I won't have to think up rhyming words  Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
very good. Interesting picture. |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Beautiful photo and I loved the verse. Them lights can play tricks on you especialy if you ever see them with a tear in your eye. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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