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wandering glider
Senior Member

since 2001-04-04

Posts 501
aloft

0 posted 2001-07-18 08:54 PM

Lonely
I'm here again
Had hoped to avoid this
But hearing nothing for so long
More tears

\\
~=====}:
//

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-07-18 09:04 PM

Welcome to Passions! A sad first write, but a welcome addition...

Please, check your e-mail for a special message!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

Snooganzmeister32
Member

since 2001-07-17

Posts 67
Cali, USA

2 posted 2001-07-18 09:29 PM

That was sooooo beautiful!!!! I cant wait to read more of yours!

The most wonderfly adorable...

SNOOGANZMEISTER!!!

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

3 posted 2001-07-18 09:41 PM

Short, simple, and with feeling.
My favortie kind!
Welcome!

~*Freedom Is Not Free*~ (Korean War Memorial)

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

4 posted 2001-07-18 09:50 PM

to Passions, Wandering Glider!

You made a great entrance with this powerfully sad cinquain. Well expressed, I do relate at times~

Take care,
Melissa~

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2001-07-18 11:30 PM

oh, my wandering glider, I was thinking perhaps you were going through my day, but apparently not for the same reason since this is a first post

very sad
very powerful!

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

6 posted 2001-07-19 12:01 PM

Welcome...and well done! You summed it up in so few words.

wandering glider
Senior Member

since 2001-04-04

Posts 501
aloft

7 posted 2001-07-19 01:03 AM

Thank you all for reading and commenting.

\\
~=====}:
//

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

8 posted 2001-07-19 09:32 AM

Not many things evoke a response of just a sad little blue face.

This really did. Have a hug?

Oh - and welcome btw...

K

I am a refugee of logic...insisting
on unlikely land with every step.

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

9 posted 2001-07-19 03:01 PM

Lonely......
as ever as I could be
your words yet speak to me.....

A very lonely and sad first write.....

Welcome to passions....

Thank you
**************************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

10 posted 2001-07-20 07:00 AM

Welcome to PIP.
God write. This is the place to be to start a new beginning.

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

11 posted 2001-07-20 03:42 PM

I absolutely love Cinquain and this was excellent!

snow

"Trace my body with your words
and in doing so, you touch my heart"
Snow

wandering glider
Senior Member

since 2001-04-04

Posts 501
aloft

12 posted 2001-07-21 12:22 PM

Severn
     A hug?  Sure!  I never refuse a hug.

My Enchanted_Melody
     "Lonely" engenders many an entry here I suspect.

2dalimit
     Maybe, maybe so.

Snow
     Thank you.  I agree, it is a nice form.

\\
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//

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

13 posted 2001-08-08 12:57 PM

wandering glider,

cinquain is one of my favourite forms and i hope you would post more...

a belated welcome to passions

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