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Rae of Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-07-18 07:30 PM


A late night call
His sweet voice
Heart skips a beat
In gentle rejoice
I needed a hug
After such a hard day
His news cheered me up
He is moving my way
He is with me in spirit
He tells me all the time
Our bond is unbroken
His heart is still mine
I long so much
His loving embrace to feel
To melt in his arms
Our true love to seal
All in good time
I softly remind my heart
This friendship is budding
The perfect place to start

Dance like nobody is watching
Love like you've never been hurt

© Copyright 2001 Tanya R. Polyak - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-07-18 07:45 PM



A good place to start, Tanya, with friendship!  Well done!

Rae of Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-07-18 07:52 PM


Thank you Sunshine!
wandering glider
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aloft
3 posted 2001-07-18 07:54 PM


A nice promising write!
Lone Wolf
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4 posted 2001-07-18 07:56 PM


Wonderful write.  Best of luck to you both.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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5 posted 2001-07-18 11:53 PM


RaeOfSunshine~
What a lovely write of the heart.
There is joy dangling from each thought.
Such a lovely beginning.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kirksters
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6 posted 2001-07-19 10:04 AM


Written from the heart, very nice.
walker
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7 posted 2001-07-19 07:30 PM


Sweet and beautiful poem. I like it!
vlraynes
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8 posted 2001-07-20 03:00 PM



Tanya-
   Ahhh...sweets, I'm smiling SOOOO BIG
   for you right now!  
   I can just feel your happiness in this one..  
   Great write!  

   love ya,  
   ~vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes




[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-20-2001).]

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2001-07-20 04:42 PM


I enjoyed reading your poem...James
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