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Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2001-07-18 12:40 PM

Are you the wind
   that sets me free?
Are you the rock
   that anchors me?
Are you the sun
   that warms my face?
Are you the rainbow
   that I chase?
Dare I trust what
   my heart believes?
Is this love that
   we've concieved?
Should I take this
   all on faith?
Or is this just
   a painful wraith?
Are you the wind
   that sets me free?
Are you the rock
   that anchors me?
Are you the one
   to break the chain?
To find the love
   beneath the pain?
Dare I dream
   dare I trust?
This lonely heart sighs
   yes...I must

Blaec
Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 130
The Sunshine State

1 posted 2001-07-18 12:50 PM

Wonderfully written! The questions that we always wonder. I hope that you find your answers!
Kris

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

2 posted 2001-07-18 01:01 AM

Oh, Paula "ARE U THE ONE TO BREAK THE CHAIN" oh my this just took my breath for a second there sweetie

I enjoyed your poem hun
Hugs2uAlways
*~coco~*

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-07-18 06:46 AM

Especially nice Paula...James

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2001-07-18 07:30 AM

Paula, this is exceptional! Wonderful phrasing and sentiments complimented by such a beautiful rhyme and cadence. I really enjoyed the flow to these words. Well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

5 posted 2001-07-18 07:56 AM

Paula my sweet sister,

yes it really is me, today is a good day, well it feels a bit better anyway. This Is Utterly Utterly Wonderful I absolutely love it.

Wondeful writing my dearest sister ansolutely wonderful.

See I'm not counted out yet I promise, I may be down but I'm not out

Superb writing darling girl utterly superb

Take care
love and warm stuff
Mushy

:smoking:

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

6 posted 2001-07-20 01:08 AM

Blaec...oh Im sure I will...we all do sooner or later....thanks you for reading

Coco...hugs sweetie...thanks

James...thank you

Kit...you are sweet to say so...thank you

Marsha...oh lol sweet sis...how could I even think you were gone? You are always here in my heart

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