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In a Dark Room Needing Light
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In a Dark Room Needing Light |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Like a solitary candle In a dark room needing light, Your flame ignited intrigue That would last throughout the night And shadows cast that evening, All in time would disappear... The warm glow of your fire Heated me and brought me near... Like a fireplace in winter -- My eyes glued upon the screen Mesmerized by your bright words And passion I had seen... I find time has no meaning When I interact with you, But forever makes its presence known Between the times I do... With anticipation I shall wait To hear from you once more And see The Light of you again And all that lies in store... (Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON) "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah wonderfully smitten.... oh I mean written... ( chuckling) I enjoyed Mark.. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Thanks, Ron... smitten, indeed. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Mm, I do understand this feeling. Well expressed, poet of dreams.. S |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
supercalifragilisticexpialodocious!!!! Yummy stuff here, Mark!    |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mark~ This is a very pretty piece. 'Like a solitary candle In a dark room needing light, Your flame ignited intrigue That would last throughout the night' Soft the flicker of your thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is sweet  I like this Mark Smitten is nice |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
This is very nice... Cindi |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
VERY good, Mark..great flow and thoughts here..gentle smile |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Mark - a most beautiful write of romance that just flows so smoothly... Very, very nice... BC |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Sandra, I smile. "Poet of Dreams", eh? Thanks for your uplifting words. VAS: thanks for the cheers! More yummy things to come. Marge, I think thoughts usually start as a soft flicker, but given the chance, they can combust very quickly. Thanks for the read and reply. Thank you, SEA... the inspiration behind this was sweet, too. Glad you enjoyed, Cindi. Thanks for reading. Logan: thank you, Sir. Inspiration has a way of letting the streams of positivity and expression flow... Bill, I'm glad you stopped by. Thanks for your thoughts. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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