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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-07-17 02:29 PM



Moments gone, memories mine
searching to keep, thoughts combine.
Days of glory, stories unfold
life once lived, cherished to hold.

Life begun, not yet seen
follow your heart, follow a dream.
Each new day, a memory brought
held in mind, in a heart caught.

In every life, someday to see
through every door, life holds a key.
Take a chance, walk through the door
life filled with memories, yet so much more.


On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

© Copyright 2001 dmsmith - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2001-07-17 02:32 PM


yes so much more...

I enjoyed this..nice


Flutterwings
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Maine
2 posted 2001-07-17 05:11 PM


Great rhythm and rhymes..... Flows like an Autumn leaf on a melodious brook....
Loved it.... ((~.~))


VAS
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Oregon
3 posted 2001-07-17 05:23 PM


ahhh, yes, and a wonderful ending, Gentle Spirit.


walker
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Florida
4 posted 2001-07-17 05:40 PM


Very positive poem, greatly done!
Irish Rose
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5 posted 2001-07-17 07:06 PM


sometimes walking through a door can be devastating, but this poem makes it sound hopeful.

"It's easier to kill love than to nurture it" Fred Hardesty

Kathleen

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2001-07-18 09:43 AM


Just a quick pop in to say thanks to all! I appreciate it.  *s*

I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance.  ~Garth~

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