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Lady In White
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0 posted 2001-07-17 11:37 AM


L’s

a promise

that is all one might be
~ a promise ~

to him
or her self

a promise of

life

light

love

living

a promise of L’s

this, I
give

to

you


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1 posted 2001-07-17 11:42 AM


Nice promise indeed... and very nicely presented. Someone is lucky to receive such promises...

I enjoyed!

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2 posted 2001-07-17 12:37 PM


Tha would be an "L" of a gift  
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3 posted 2001-07-17 12:46 PM


Lady in White...

Lovely
Luscious
Lively
Lip-smacking letters of life

and Interloper, you're incorrigible, but I LOL

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4 posted 2001-07-17 01:45 PM


Nicely done.

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5 posted 2001-07-17 02:13 PM


Very cool...what and how you wrote this!
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6 posted 2001-07-17 09:09 PM


LadyInWhite~
Light, lifting, lovely L's~
The thought is stunningly presented.

Can't resist - but then again, what the L do I know ?
Love ya'
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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7 posted 2001-07-26 09:55 AM



Cpat...good promises are hard to come by...but easy to keep...thank you!

Interloper - a little tongue in cheek looks good on you...

Virginia, we stand in agreement...thank you...

Thank you Mysteria...

JLR...thank you...

Marge, sometimes presentation helps, and sometimes, the words stand alone!  Thank you!

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8 posted 2001-07-27 12:24 PM


Virginia, I am NOT incorrigible!  I have been told many times just how corrigible I am.  What they DO say is that I cannot be reformed.
(Psssssst, what does that word mean, anyhow?)

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth
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9 posted 2001-07-27 02:14 PM


love this.....minimal but powerful..great writing  
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10 posted 2001-07-28 10:25 PM



Lady In White-
   I Love this Little List of Lovely L's.
   Wonderful promises.
   Very nicely done..

   hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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11 posted 2001-07-29 12:39 PM


If he doesn't accept this gift, then get the L out of there!  
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12 posted 2001-07-29 12:42 PM


Short, sweet and to the point...you don't mince your L's lovely lady!  
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