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Twenty or Less...#3
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Twenty or Less...#3 |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
(Now that I've posted most of my older poetry and lyrics, I'm ready to dive into some fresh writing and thoughts. Since my style tends to be lengthy and very strict form and rhyme, I'm going to try something a little different for me: a new series of poems that I'll call "TWENTY OR LESS..." implying that each will consist of twenty or less words, in free-form style, with the intent of letting the words conjure up subjective impressions and definitions for my readers -- let the previous boundaries of style and form evaporate, for a while, and let's see what your impressions are... Enjoy! -MVS) ======================================== Always looking within Tomorrow's never found My uphill course Breathes out A desire for Love (Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON) "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
a bit different form... this is nice and easier I think for many to draw meaning from... I enjoyed.. Inside the love found many dark nights wait feverish heat generated now Breathing my desire blood is enriched with more still panting for you [This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (edited 07-17-2001).] |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
We'll see, Ron... Your stanzas should get them going... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mark, Much to think about, enjoyed the read. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Thanks, Sy -- I'd be curious to hear to what conclusion you arrive... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Like this one lots. Yesterday will haunt though yet tomorrow may arrive in time... |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
always an uphill struggle for finding love |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Sandra, tomorrow always arrives "in time", but are we ready to greet it? My Lady: artistic and true. Now, just to maintain the plateau and not have it be all "down hill" from there... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
introspectively cannot find future from past love is beyond reach look outward beyond one's self love awaits on horizon Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I like that, Interloper... words to consider. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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