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Mishtheelf
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since 2001-07-10

Posts 68

0 posted 2001-07-16 10:33 PM

Lounging uneasy on the precipice of sleep,
I sit alone on my bed of uncertain anticipations.
Wondering, ever wondering, what is to come of me?
And as I gaze from my plain window
I see the shuttling particles of existance fluttering by --
Fluttering endlessly by...
I wonder if they noticed me, sitting alone on this bed,
Half asleep and waiting for some unseen thing.

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

1 posted 2001-07-16 10:37 PM

Welcome. This forum may contain more "answeres" than you dreamed possible if you have the time to ponder the poems... Contemplative write describing an experience many of us, I'm sure, have shared.

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

2 posted 2001-07-16 11:09 PM

great opening line, enjoyed the read.

Saunni
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

3 posted 2001-07-16 11:25 PM

Awesome write here! Cool title!

Sauni8

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-07-17 01:35 AM

MishTheElf~
Welcome to Passions.
Lots of 'fluttering' here !
You'll enjoy this circle of friends and poets.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

5 posted 2001-07-17 04:58 AM

And as I gaze from my plain window
I see the shuttling particles of existance fluttering by --
Fluttering endlessly by...

=============

I loved the lots of "fluttering" ......

Welcome to Passions.....

You have managed to draw such a mood of anticipation and contemplation

Thank you....
*********************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

6 posted 2001-07-17 07:49 AM

nicely done... and welcome!!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

7 posted 2001-07-17 08:58 AM

Welcome to Passions! Please, take time to enjoy yourself, read, relax, write...and have a wonderful time!

Please, check your e-mail for a special message!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

8 posted 2001-07-17 09:46 AM

Welcome!!! Very nicely done, I too like the opening line and I think many of us have times at the edge of the bed looking out our plain window, maybe more than at other times right now...did someone say 'recession'?

or is it just summer?

Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

9 posted 2001-07-20 03:08 AM

now THIS is a good one Mish

Yep, bienvenido to the house of the blessed mad ones

You know? I really like this one, and I'm going to add it to my library..
-Lynne

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

10 posted 2001-07-20 03:11 AM

pretty cool trippy write...welcome to Passions

Mishtheelf
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since 2001-07-10

Posts 68

11 posted 2001-07-20 11:29 AM

Thank you, everyone, for the warm reception. I hope your inputs in the future will help me to chisel down my style into something noteworthy

Thanks for the responses!

Teddy

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

12 posted 2001-07-23 01:13 PM

Mishtheelf-
   Welcome to passions!
   Nice first post.

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

13 posted 2001-07-23 04:10 PM

Welcome! Like the first post! hope you enjoy it here!
hugs
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

14 posted 2001-07-23 06:45 PM

Excelent poem, and welcome to passions.

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

15 posted 2001-07-23 09:24 PM

How did I miss this before?

Welcome to Passions!!!
I love this poem...I especially like the lines:

"I see the shuttling particles of existance fluttering by --
Fluttering endlessly by..."

I look forward to reading more from you!
~Krista

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie

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