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Corinne
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0 posted 2001-09-10 09:09 PM


Uito of the Mosque  

Uito is quite eccentric
in all her undertakings,
she’s exotic and quixotic,
a queen in the making.

She drinks only red
and only after dusk,
from a goblet by her bed;
wears only human musk.

She’s known to flit about
a girl about town
on a nightly scout,
when the sun’s gone down.

She spurns citrus’ scent,
loves to bathe in calm pools,
spreads trouble with intent
and collects ruby jewels.

Named for far away regions,
of the mosque, is Uito
she’s fond of rainy seasons,
the always hungry Mosquito.

© 2001 Corinne Bailey

© Copyright 2001 Corinne - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2001-09-10 09:21 PM


Ah yes - This one's got a distinctive bite to it...
Voiceless
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2 posted 2001-09-10 10:26 PM


I do believe that I know here,
not to mention the rest of her family!
Great Job!

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Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2001-09-10 10:37 PM


Corinne~
LOL !
I just hate them buzzy critters~

I've started a petition to nominate them
to go to the top of the endangered species list~

Cool write ... the title had me thinking you'd found an unknown goddess to write about~ LOL !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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Corinne
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4 posted 2001-09-11 11:05 AM


Thanks, Nan, Voiceless and Marge!

Got the idea after passing a sign for Mosquito Road, thought how odd the spelling of the word looked...

Cor

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