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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2001-07-11 10:07 AM


Innocence lost
In back seat lessons,
Once guarded
By jealous silence,

Lives…
Merged before
Became strangers,
Tangled in
Time.


© Copyright 2001 Cpat Hair - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2001-07-11 10:13 AM


Cpat Hair,
Could not have said it better myself. Enjoyed

Lady In White
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2 posted 2001-07-11 10:27 AM



So much said...

so much remains....

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3 posted 2001-07-11 10:32 AM


Thanks Seymour you comment is appreciated


Lady... always more to be said or always the remains to be examined... thanks for the comment

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4 posted 2001-07-11 10:58 AM


how do you do it?

shrink all of adolescence and its youthful passion into a few lines and then its consequences into a few more

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5 posted 2001-07-11 11:02 AM


Vas... I thinkit is because I am simple minded...and can't handle long complex thoughts.

Thanks for your comment


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6 posted 2001-07-11 11:11 AM


Rather like a nugget of gold -- very dense, in a small space, shining with brilliance and value.

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

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7 posted 2001-07-11 12:22 PM


Thanks Mark! glad you liked... but it is probably more like coal than gold... there is a potential fire in those meetings.. ( smiling)
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8 posted 2001-07-11 04:31 PM


You acumen contiues to grow, you rascal  
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9 posted 2001-07-11 04:45 PM


And I thought the medicine was working..well back to the doctor and see if he can shrink it again... ( chuckling)

Thanks for the comment my friend


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10 posted 2001-07-12 07:44 AM


CPatHair~
*smiling*
And honestly don't know why, but~
keep getting this image of a '57 Chevy~  
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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11 posted 2001-07-12 08:52 AM


Two sips thrashing in the night. Ah, but we've our memories.
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12 posted 2001-07-12 09:11 AM


Marge... I believe it was an old chrysler...
(smiling) Thanks for reading and commenting


RS... ( chuckling) yes I think you said it well.. thanks for reading!

Bill Charles
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13 posted 2001-07-12 10:41 AM


Cpat Hair - your words are very meaningful. I enjoyed your writing...

BC

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14 posted 2001-07-13 09:34 AM


Thanks Bill.. I guess we all hope our words are meaningful..appreciate the comment!!

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