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Daniel van Vliet
Member

since 2001-08-31

Posts 80

0 posted 2001-09-06 11:34 PM

I'm so tired and cold,
living my life without you.
Even though your breath is lost
I still want to breathe for you.
A silhouette of laughing
lays dormant on your pillow
My heavy heart weeps......
When will today become tomorrow

...I'm so alone,
lost in these shallow words.

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2001-09-06 11:41 PM

Such bittersweet words, Daniel - and a very lovely entree to our Passionate world. Welcome - settle in and enjoy.

Check your email for a special greeting..

cruz
Member

since 2000-07-18

Posts 282
Dallas,Texas USA

2 posted 2001-09-07 12:03 PM

short yet packs a big punch! gr8 job, welcome.

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

3 posted 2001-09-07 12:13 PM

Oooh I enjoyed this. Looking forward to
seeing more from you : )

<3 RosePetal

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-09-07 12:18 PM

A very emotive piece ...the ache is evident.
Much depth expressed in a few very well chosen words.
Well done poet sir
Welcome to Poetry Land, so nice to have you here with us.

take care
jm

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-09-07 01:15 AM

DanielV~
Welcome to Passions~

'A silhouette of laughing
lays dormant on your pillow'

This aches with such isolated imagery~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Masked Intruder

Moderator

Senior Member

since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

6 posted 2001-09-07 01:42 AM

An excellent blend of talent and emotion. Your closing lines did not do justice to your work; these words are certainly not shallow.

You can't wake a person who is pretending to be asleep. -- Navajo Proverb

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

7 posted 2001-09-07 01:59 AM

Daniel-
   Wow...what a heartwrenching first post.
   Very powerful write.

   Welcome to Passions!
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

8 posted 2001-09-08 11:28 AM

Hi Daniel, sad but lovely poem.

Are you from Dutch origine? At least your name is

Would be nice to have an other Dutchie here.

Titia

Almost forgot to say WELCOME

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 09-08-2001).]

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

9 posted 2001-09-08 11:39 AM

Tragically beautiful, Daniel... Welcome.

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

10 posted 2001-09-08 11:54 AM

An emotional poem I enjoyed to read. Welcome.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

11 posted 2001-09-08 02:04 PM

Welcome to passions, and I like your entrance, heartfelt words you've penned here.

Charisma

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2001-09-08 02:16 PM

Ahhh this is sooo sad.
But, for you, a cheery welcome to Passions!

~Time has cast a spell on you
so you won't ever forget me~

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

13 posted 2001-09-08 02:31 PM

Beautifully sad......so well expressed

And abig welcome for you at Passions...

Thank you
*********************

The Rusty Knight
Member

since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

14 posted 2001-09-08 03:18 PM

Welcome to Passions.

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

15 posted 2001-09-08 03:24 PM

What an excellent way to say hello! Welcome to Passions! We hope you come by often and leave more gems such as this!

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