I write, therefore I am...a poet

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Open Poetry #15

I write, therefore I am...a poet

Hollowman
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since 2001-06-01

Posts 117

0 posted 2001-09-04 06:58 PM

Alas my love the sword of destiny has
cleaved its path through our hearts
Not a trodden path of wisdom, a path
of anger felt deep within you
For you handled the cold weapon of
a loves destruction
Now we stare and watch the embers
of cupids work fade.

Shall I doff my hat in summery
showers to bid you farewell?
Or sit and wait for the waves
of sorrow to crash upon my armour,
drowning the screams of a man so wronged.

Pity not me my angel, for pity is the
product of web-weavers, A web I have
been set free of, forever.

Minds eye, eyes my own mind my dear
once I have tasted this chalice of
malice, its bitter sharp edge needs
no reminder of whats in store for the unwarey.

Draw into your web of desire and crush
hearts of men, men, good men alas I was
of this mettle....

Richy

hope you all like it out there

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

1 posted 2001-09-04 07:54 PM

I like this very much
~Connie~

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

2 posted 2001-09-04 09:09 PM

Wow. This is POWERFUL. The way you put the words together is very strong. Yes, I really, really like this

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

3 posted 2001-09-04 10:23 PM

Richy...this has power behind it. A great read.
alan

Hollowman
Member

since 2001-06-01

Posts 117

4 posted 2001-09-05 05:03 PM

wow, thank you all so much - I am indeed flattered to say the least.

once again thank you.

x

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

5 posted 2001-09-06 09:40 AM

I like it a lot too.

Charisma

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

6 posted 2001-09-06 10:06 AM

I enjoyed! Thank you!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2001-09-06 10:11 AM

Hollowman,
Well done enjoyed the read.

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

8 posted 2001-09-06 11:35 AM

Such a wonderful write....
So eloquently written.

I quite enjoyed it....

Thank you
************************

"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

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