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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-09-04 05:31 PM

Unbeliever

what a fool I was
to think
I could change you
with my love
when there was
something bigger
you wanted
to be part of
and the real truth
is no matter
how hard you try
you can’t
another change
they have to want
to be different
not same behavior
to rearrange
I use to believe
in magic
and in miracles
but along the way
lost my
faith and trust
and found magic
is fantasy
another type of dust
for in reality
it’s just
a slight of hand
quicker than the
eye can see
no longer a believer
in things
never to be

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 09-04-2001).]

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

1 posted 2001-09-04 06:15 PM

Though your subject is not encouraging, your poetry continues to be . . .

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-09-04 06:30 PM

perhaps you're looking with the wrong hands. . .

well done helen. . . you're growing each day. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

3 posted 2001-09-04 07:47 PM

Very Good Write!!!
Sad but True
Remember the magic doesn't happen in our time but in the one who controles time, time....

Thank You
~~~Connie~~~

[This message has been edited by Zinsser (edited 09-05-2001).]

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

4 posted 2001-09-05 04:10 AM

I understood your words well and nearly stunned, I read...

not same behavior
to rearrange

you rewrite the essence of my experience.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

5 posted 2001-09-05 07:34 AM

How beautifully written. How sad.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-09-05 07:52 AM

OneSlickLady~

'lost my
faith and trust
and found magic
is fantasy
another type of dust'

Now that's sad~
I'm betting that you'll find the magic again~
And it will dazzle you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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