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Open Poetry #15

Pleasures discontent

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2001-09-03 07:51 PM

Leave me
hate me
let this world anger you
Haunt me
touch me
then wonder why its abandend you
The answer of hell is a curious wake
that feeds you ill of the price you take
which always in the end keeps you clean
the banner of the times is turning me.

Leave me
hate me
let this world come at you
Haunt me
taunt me
then follow the arrows its pointing to
If you cleanse the birth of rightousness
you feel the spit upon your breath
and the illness that takes you to your sin
is the wisdom of pain that covers your skin

All in all its not so clear
for the penace of the pleasure we want
given to us by gods own tears
we fight for our souls in our angry fears.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2001-09-03 08:07 PM

Oh my, you said it Michael.
Sandra

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-09-03 08:25 PM

and the illness that takes you to your sin
is the wisdom of pain that covers your skin
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Whoa........talk about deep.......
damn deep..........purge it baby...purge it.
good to see your name here MG
jm

A man who asks a woman to lie for him, is a man who will lie to that woman.
A woman who lies for a man, is a woman who lies to herself.
(vise versa)

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

3 posted 2001-09-03 08:28 PM

This got heavy and deep right off the top. Good job.
alan

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

4 posted 2001-09-03 09:42 PM

Wow. Very profound. (I was gonna say deep, but it's already been said) Great writing, really great writing.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2001-09-03 10:30 PM

I know it's been said Tracey, but I'm going to say it anyway....Deep, Very Deep.
Enjoyed!! Good writing.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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