navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #15 » Sleeping Love
Open Poetry #15
Post A Reply Post New Topic Sleeping Love Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
ramrog
Member
since 2001-08-22
Posts 50


0 posted 2001-08-27 01:43 AM


Sleeping Love

Yet another
Not just any, this
Yet another love
Slips away
Changes to less

Devoured
By pride
Ten miles wide
Lies sleeping
To wake ne'er again

Marcus Swearingen

[This message has been edited by ramrog (edited 08-27-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Marcus Swearingen - All Rights Reserved
Sven
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
1 posted 2001-08-29 07:34 PM


when pride follows love. . . the fall is soon found. . .

well done. . .

-----------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Suetang
Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
2 posted 2001-08-29 09:46 PM


Beautiful!

Suetang

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2001-08-29 10:02 PM


Very nice indeed...I love it!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #15 » Sleeping Love

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary