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Gwendrina
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since 2001-08-21
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0 posted 2001-08-26 07:28 PM


The fresh streams ran by her, and murmured her moans. Sing willow, willow, willow
Her salt tears fell from her and softened the stones.

From Othello by Shakespeare



The wind saw her rise
from the fragments of a fallen star.
She rose into the sky -
a shadow glittering
like sun sparkles upon the lake.
She ascended into the cool expanse,
a voice chanting
with the soft, plaintive pitch
Of Desdemona’s willow song..

Her luminous wings
grew like wild ferns
against the gray driftwood of clouds-
sprouting, spreading
until the shimmering fibers
dissolved into space.
Then she was gone;
and no one knew that she had come
except the wind blowing
from the mushroom caves
and clam shells sucking
on wet slices of sand.
They had seen the death of a shooting star
and its maidenly spirit dispersing
the glimmer
of a burnt-out myth.


© Copyright 2001 Gwendrina - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2001-08-26 07:33 PM


Beautiful graphics to lead into this poem full of exceptional imaginative images!    Well written!
Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-08-26 11:40 PM


This is fabulous...
a wonderful write of mystic essence...
very cool presentation and tie in to the classic introduction...
suberb imagery in this as well.
very well done poetess Gwendrina

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2001-08-26 11:42 PM


GwenDrina~
You write with such a lovely pen~
Delicate imagery brought to life~
Thank you for sharing~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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