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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
lovely cool has graced this summer morn and placed Cat’s face lingering in lovely rays while girth of body basks in shade lapping up two distinct summer worlds in purrs twitches and dreams © July 15, 2001 |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Oh, to be a cat on a warm summer day! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
VAS, Did she purr you a dream? Very nice. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Yes, JLR! And Sy, perhaps she has, but must shower now for church, see ya all later today. Thanks for reading and leaving word. Virginia |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Nice poem VAS we have a house full of cats!! Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Mishtheelf Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 68 |
I have a habit of taking things pretty literally most of the time, so I guess that makes me a weird poetry critic hehe I'll just stick with this statement: I felt as though I were lying under a tree with that little kitty. Thanks for the mental picture! |
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