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Three A.M. Cinquain
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Three A.M. Cinquain |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Three A.M. wide eyed awakening jumbled thoughts obscuring pleasantness of abounding dreams buried "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
been that, felt that...you pen the process well  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I seem to be awakening right in the middle of lots of nice dreams lately...James |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
I too have been thru this. Wonderful read lady alan |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
The feeling is intense in this piece Wynter... "jumbled thoughts obscuring pleasantness of abounding dreams" Good work! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ This is just so cool~ I like what you've done with it~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Well, those are certainly the kinds of dreams I'd like to be awakened by...as opposed to the adrenaline pushing, sweat inducing, anxiety laden ones. Great cinquain for 3 am or anytime! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wynter, You are geting better and better, love this. *L* |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice.... very nice indeed!! |
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