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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-08-24 06:26 PM



I hid my face
avoided your eyes
ran away from
your touch
Until I couldn't
no more
You planned this
your intended caress
where you cornered me
deliberately
And made me beg
for more

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 08-24-2001).]

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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
1 posted 2001-08-24 06:50 PM


*sigh* Sometimes it feels that way, eh?   I love this. Short, simple, and full of message.  

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

2 posted 2001-08-25 01:11 AM


Don't cha hate it when that happens?
dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
3 posted 2001-08-25 07:59 AM


hmm..this is a good little ditty!  i like!  

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"i believe we are here for a reason.  
as each day unfolds,
we see less of the shadow
and more of the sun"  -unknown

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
4 posted 2001-08-25 11:23 PM


Hi Walker,

Very nice here, lots of thoughts can come from this, I enjoyed very much,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



Kay Vibbert
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since 2001-08-25
Posts 35
Indiana
5 posted 2001-08-26 12:53 PM


now this is the kind of caress a girl could start to love!


"It's not gossip unless I tell it to somebody else!"  Lucy Ricardo

Kay (aka/Irish Rose)

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2001-09-20 04:35 PM


Watch out...you know what's coming next...a kiss...James
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