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ramrog
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0 posted 2001-08-24 02:04 AM



Charles

He grasped my daughter,
As he once did me
Pulled her close,
Placed her on his knee
Called her "baby-doll"

She playfully feigning
Attempts to get away
Refusing to say
The magic word
As once did I

My mother's father
Delighting in her,
And she in him
Contented to be
Together

Marcus Swearingen

© Copyright 2001 Marcus Swearingen - All Rights Reserved
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Gaia
1 posted 2001-08-24 02:10 AM


Every child should have such a wonderful grampa. This is a nice tribute to a very special relationship that is rarer than a blue rosebud.  
serenity blaze
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2 posted 2001-08-24 02:38 AM


You expressed this beautifully. I recall watching my parents with my newborn son, amazed...it made me truly understand the continuity of life and love across generations. Just Amazing.
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3 posted 2001-08-24 02:44 AM


RamRog~
Welcome to Passions.
Nice entrance piece~
I'm sure you'll enjoy your stay with us~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Nan
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4 posted 2001-08-24 08:30 AM


What a wonderful entree to our Passionate world.  Heartfelt poetry is always welcome here. Settle in and enjoy... and check your email for a special greeting...
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5 posted 2001-08-24 08:50 AM


a nice poem..and it captures a tender moment I hope she remembers for many years..


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6 posted 2001-08-24 09:25 AM



Welcome to Passions!  I enjoyed your first post, looking forward to more!

SmittenKitten
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7 posted 2001-08-24 11:07 AM


   WELCOME!  


A great first post...you'll love it here  
~Krista  

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And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

illusion
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8 posted 2001-08-24 11:27 AM


A tender moment captured by loving eyes - I enjoyed this very much.
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