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Parker
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since 2000-01-06
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0 posted 2001-08-22 01:00 AM


The best of her
(Spontaneous Twilight Duet on ICQ)

I need to be
the best of me
all the laughter'
you and me
and best of me
all the best
in death of me
secrets
dreams
the rest of me

I'd like to hear about the rest of you...
the best of you
the worst of you

tell me some secrets that'll lift my muse
tell me the secrets you'd dare to lose
and every dare
I care to loose

tell me
tell me
the sum and whole of you....

and tell me what wet means....  

I could tell the secrets told
and all of dreams painted in gold
I could leave a copy left
and all my dreams be left bereft
I would do most anything
to feel the joy of joyous sing
and every rhyme you find in doubt...
I'll exit--I will do without.

Well tell me of your secret list
those whispers spoken in a wish
those daring thoughts to make me blush
please don't hurry there is no rush

I want to know your other you
and tell me of this one too
I've seen you there in blue on blue
and often wondered the who of you

Do you live a happy life?
Is your smile fullfilled at night?
Just tell me what you want to say,
Just tell me anything today.

All my heart
is tears of cried
cut in pieces
that have died
everything I am
I be....
pieces cut
in spite of me.

as long as you can feel your heart
one big piece or little parts
the future is the fog of un dreamt dreams
just reach for them and always believe

I have a hole within my heart
I wonder if I'll find that part...
where to look when love is dark
tonight is as good as any start..

A friend can be that missing part.

A friend?
I hope that part is ME....

thank you lovie.....

serenity and Parker Aug 15, 2001

** Thank you dear serenity for being so sweet
poem me anytime... **


[This message has been edited by Parker (edited 08-22-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 James Haley - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-08-22 01:10 AM


very very nice you two...
a sincere meeting of poetic minds and friends in kind.
well done poets P and S
jm

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
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2 posted 2001-08-22 02:09 AM


Theres something to be said for spontaneous combustion huh? Great write you two
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2001-08-22 06:52 PM


Oh Wow...you caught me off guard AGAIN...this was so much fun, and I'm looking forward to another write! Hugs, lovie!
Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion
4 posted 2001-08-22 07:54 PM


This is wonderful! Thanks for sharing!

Corinne

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