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Open Poetry #15

Living on a hope

Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

0 posted 2001-08-21 08:36 AM

Our hidden feelings, not so deep
Those hidden thoughts that just won’t sleep
They share our lives each day
Temptations, they seem always calling
Even though the years keep falling
What is the truth and way?
We wonder every day

In our dreams the all we see
Are they pictures meant to be?
Surviving on that hope
Planting seeds of many wishes
Accepting just what life it dishes
Reality will be
From wanting never free
Trying just to cope
Living on a hope

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2001-08-21 08:48 AM

Coping - through hope - It's a positive approach indeed... Nice words here, Rick..

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-08-21 08:49 AM

coping through hope is sometimes all that we can ask for...

well done Sir....

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

3 posted 2001-08-21 07:11 PM

For me...when hope fades, faith kicks in and holds me up. Just so I can still believe. I think they may go hand in hand. Hold on! Beautiful pondering!

Sincerely,
Regina

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

4 posted 2001-08-22 08:20 AM

Hi Rick,

Hope is what keeps me going and you said it beautifully in this little gem, enjoyed very much.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

5 posted 2001-08-22 08:44 AM

The mind of the poet seems to ponder much, it is nice to share all the feelings with you, the highs and the lows. I am sure each day we all live on a little hope.

Thank you all for your replies, I look forward to reading your works soon.

Rick

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

6 posted 2001-08-22 09:48 AM

The mind of a poet indeed goes here, there, and never quite settles anywhere, but leaves a trail of light in its wake...

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