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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan 
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Yes / No In the interim Of yes and no There lies the gray land Of maybe so and I don’t know This gray frustrating land Brings perspiration To many a hand. Decisions, decisions So much to know In between yes and no. Decisiveness is the seed Of those who wish to grow. In the land of maybe so And I don’t know Lie many dreams That were lost And failed to grow. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Good points to consider, Daniel. Beyond decision, however, is action. With that final ingredient, the future can be carved, many-a-time by the individual. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Decisions, decisions So much to know In between yes and no. ================ True......so true........ Such wisdom and expressed so wonderfully Thank you.... ****************************** It's only me.......only me |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is a cool write... I liked the references to the shades of gray...and your rhyme flow as well... making a decision is often a gray area for me.. interesting spin on these thoughts well done poet sir jm Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Thanks, Mark, MyEnchanted-Melody and Janet. Wouldn't be nice if everthing was cyristal clear in life with no difficult descions. I usually toss it back and forth wieghing each option and then I go with what I feel is best. Some cannot do this. They can't commit to Yes or No. Do not fear going forward slowly, Fear only standing still. [This message has been edited by shadow974 (edited 07-14-2001).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
okay what's up here have you been reading my thoughts? are you the shadow that follows my very conundrums with dogged absolute? no fair!!! too good, you! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
yuh and nuh! |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Who knows, The shadow knows! Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Very profound work, Shadow.  All writing comes |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
the title pulled me in and i am glad i read this...i especially liked the last verse...yup, one must take initative or he will live to regret his missed opportunities...thank you |
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