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Silent Are The Dreams
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Silent Are The Dreams |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Silent Are The Dreams Silent are the dreams that come on tiptoes in the night Silent are desires blazing in a candle’s light Silent are the songs that have been wasting in my heart My room is wrapped in feather sounds since we have been apart Quiet is tomorrow’s hope that rustles in the trees Hushed are whispering verses that are blowing in the breeze Soft is someone’s trembling voice that settled in my ear Unheard are my illusions that are ever drawing near I can hear the murmur in my heart’s enraptured beat Sounds of meadow’s creatures come alive in summer’s heat Babbling is the little brook that springs from hillside wells Lovely is the music of the country chapel bells I listen for an echo chime from Jupiter and Mars Resounding all your love for me - but silent are the stars Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 08-13-2001).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This is so very composed in its stillness, you can hear the feather touch down... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth,my friend~ So tenderly you play the strings of my heart~ Lovely, dear lady~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Silence can be deadening, and when all the world seems still and right a trembling heart can fill with fright. Enjoyed the lonely lament. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Silence and stillness can be such a deafening sound, I'm wishing you a symphony of love to wrap your heart around. Oh this was kind of sad, but beautifully done! To see real beauty ~ look with your heart |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Truly beautiful. Silence speaks loudly at times! Betty Lou Hebert |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh Elizabeth, this just brought out a whole bunch of sighs from me... Beautiful expression PoetFriend... Hugs2uAlways *~coco~* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Silent are the dreams that come on tiptoes in the night Silent are desires blazing in a candle’s light Silent are the songs that have been wasting in my heart My room is wrapped in feather sounds since we have been apart very nice.... a joy to read! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Elizabeth- What a soft and loving write... Absolutely beautiful. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You're so smooth...James |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Beautiful, so tender in saddness. [This message has been edited by shadow974 (edited 08-19-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Silence rings the bell of eternity. Lovely Sy |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
"Fly me to the moon and let me play among the stars, let me see what love is like on Jupiter and Mars..." I guess you showed 'em with this piece. Well done! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you everyone for your lovely remarks. I truly appreciate your reading and taking time to comment Your frind in poetry Liz |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Hauntingly sad, beautifully expressed, Elizabeth. I also wish you a symphony! |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
I AM SO GRATEFUL i TOOK THE TIME TODAY TO VISIT NETPOETS.....SO MANY POEMS TODAY ARE TOUCHING MY HEAT AND SOUL....AND HERE IS YET ANOTHER ONE....IT RINGS TO CLOSE TO HOME....LIKE SOMEONE HAS A LOOKING GLASS INTO MY LIFE....THANK YOU IT IS JUST PERFECTION!!!! Julie :) |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Elizabeth, Great and wonderful piece of art here. Loved it. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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