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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Bittled Pomlets The earth was created, then Adam was formed From the soil of the earth he was smirchily born From the riblets of girth came the githers of Eve Two people in Eden to skither and skeeve They lived in a flority spedder of space As Eden was arborly nibbly graced The two were feguddled and flettered in song Ungoothed in the booklngs of right and of wrong Then Eve saw a pomlet in dangled display A snorkering squibble approached her to say Go ahead, smitch the pomlet, it’s strueddled and ripe She grabbed it a bittled off one little bite Then Adam befurgled and bittled as well And their guiltering dilt upon both of them fell They remersed in the bittling bunglet they did So quivering into bushnugerts they hid They were sent form the arborly nibbly place And they tergled some stemlets with smirch on their face Plugooning the gremlets for their daily table And brithered two sputlets, one was ept, one was able The sputlets then squibbered a very bad squib And Cain was pergolished for all he had did Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 08-13-2001).] |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
If only she hadn't bittled that Pomlet, we could all still be feguddled and flettered. Oh well such is life. So perfectly you scribed. Sincerely, Regina |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I do believe you've conjured up a whole new chapter of your life....and I for some strange reason am NOT mentally challenged by the language you've created....in other words, I enjoyed! |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
And we've all been pergolished ever since. I concur with Sunshine this is easily read and understood. Does that make us all nuts? Enjoyed. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
...never know, life may have been quite boring if she had 'Plugooned the gremlets' instead of 'smitching the pomlet'. If nothing else, she made it immensly interesting and gave birth to religion - not that I would not have preferred to live in such an 'aborly nibbly space' for all my life... Neat write, my friend. jwesley |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
WEll, I'm just trying to have a little fun to cheer myself up. Now, if the rest go nuts in the meantime - not my problem I think, though a new outlook on an old story gives new light to the meaning of it all. THanks for bearing with me Lots of love Liz |
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