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slickpnkgal
New Member
since 2001-08-12
Posts 5


0 posted 2001-08-12 03:15 PM


They come in all different,
sizes and kinds,
they are so comfy,
I wear 'em all the time.
Converse All-Stars,
they're totally great,
Converse All-Stars,
are really first rate.
No one's too old,
or even too young,
they're hip and they're comfy,
and don't cost a ton.
Converse All-Stars,
my most favorite type of shoe,
Converse All-Stars,
are good for the health too.
Okay so I'm done,
since I probably sound crazy you see,
but Converse All-Stars,
are the ones for me.

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Constance
Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393
Ohio
1 posted 2001-08-12 03:28 PM


Hey, slickpnkgal. very cute and fun poem! I especially like the subject, cause shoes in general are a weakness of mine. love em.
SmittenKitten
Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet
2 posted 2001-08-12 03:39 PM


hehe, cute    you should hook up with the Converse people, as your poem would be great advertisement    
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jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2001-08-12 03:41 PM


(chuckles here...) Thanks, needed that! Neat how "things" make us feel good, huh (like you).

jwesley

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2001-08-12 03:48 PM



Have to agree with the others, you'd be a great spokesperson! Welcome to Passions! Check your e-mail for a special greeting!

cruz
Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282
Dallas,Texas USA
5 posted 2001-08-14 12:53 PM


they also last longer.
gotta pair of black ones!
nice write, cool subject.

CMGrimm
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 685
USA
6 posted 2001-08-14 02:20 AM


very cool... nice poem...
and welcome...

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.



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